This demonstration speech on how to make a pretty cool paper airplane is one that pretty well planned out. The video can be found on youtube.com. The good points in this demonstration speech are that you can clearly see every step that is going on. The bird’s eye view of the process is very helpful when trying to make this paper plane. It is almost like how I would be looking at the paper when I would be making the paper plane. The other thing that I personally like is that it’s kind of relaxing not having to listen to someone’s annoying voice when they are making this paper plane. I know this could be a problem for some people because some people need the steps of a process to be spelt out for them. Everyone learns differently though so this it is understandable that this demonstration speech might not be the best for some people.
Some things that could be fixed in this speech is that the person making this paper airplane never repeats any of the steps for making this paper airplane. Although this is a video, if was making video was made live you can’t just rewind the demonstration speech and go over the steps again. Another thing that could be fixed is that he could talk during his demonstration. Like I said before, everyone learns differently and some people like learning differently and need steps to be spoken to them to help them out. Also, this process is a little boring and monotonous. The person who made this could have at least put some music into his demonstration speech.
-Max
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